The most attracting/ fascinating tourist attraction

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I have just been to Ha Long Bay, one of the most famous places in Vietnam and it is so much impressed that I would love to share it with you all .

Halong bay which is situated in the North-East of Vietnam. from the high, the whole sight looks like a likely (wrong words) huge picture. We can see several variety of islands, some of them are like people standing towards continent, the others are like sails, etc. All are so close to every visitor that they (pronoun) don’t want to leave. On the other hand( wrong word), Ha Long Bay has been with the development of the Vietnamese people’s history, with such famous names as Van Don, which had commercial port. And Bai Tho mountain, which has left autographs of emperors, famous people.

Ha Long Bay has a tropical ecosystem with thousands of different species of plants, animals from forest to sea such as: fishes, lobsters, etc. Tourists enjoy visiting the famous places and buying valuable souvenirs related to Ha Long Bay.

(lack of linking words) There are over 1,06 billion people. They are not only very friendly, hospitable bit they also welcome all visitors to visit beautiful sightseeing.

Every visitor feels pleasant with fresh air, islands, sea, etc. All landscapes make a wonderful picture, is ( which is the subject here) the attractive spot of everyone want to see wonder of nature.

Let’s come to Ha Long Bay and see any differences.

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I have just been to Ha Long Bay, one of the most famous places in Vietnam and so much impressed that I would love to share it with you all .

Geographically, Halong bay, situated in the North-East of Vietnam, from the high, looks a panorama of variety of islands. Some of which are like people standing facing the continent, others are like sailing, . All are so welcoming to every visitor that they never find it easy to leave.

More over, Ha Long Bay has been with the development of the Vietnamese history, with famous names like Van Don, which used to be a commercial port. Bai Tho(what is it in English?) mountain, which has cut with autographs of emperors(who???), famous people.

Ha Long Bay has tropical ecosystem with thousands of different species of plants, animals from forest to sea such as: fishes, lobsters, etc.

Tourists enjoy visiting famous places and buying valuable souvenirs reminding them of Ha Long Bay.

There are over 1,06 billion people. They are not only very friendly, hospitable but they also are very hospitable to all visitors to their home land.

Every visitor feels pleasant with fresh air, islands, sea, etc. All landscapes make a wonderful picture, is attractive spot of everyone want to see wonder of nature.

Let’s come to Ha Long Bay and see the differences.

Attention

Would you love to travel to HL, with this description?

Never would I.

Phạm Quỳnh Anh.

I.Describing tourist attraction:

Lying in the centre of Hanoi capital, my hometown, is Hoan Kiem lake where happened many historic events .

Every Vietnamese People are always proud of.It

returned his sword to the Golden Tortoise Hoan Kiem means where

Le Loi king after defeating enemies with glorious feats and libertying the country,bringing the full,happy life for the People.It is also where you can see the bright sunshine spreading on the face of the lake from The Huc bridge connecting Ngoc Son temple ,the great building on the lake and the main land.All of them makes Hoan Kiem lake ,an important part of the city of my mind.

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Introduction

Why

DHuong

1. Describe my hometown as a tourist attraction.

Have you selected a place for your holiday this year? Please visit Hanoi capital, my hometown. Definitely, you will have a wonderful vacation even though you are the choosiest tourist. Situated in the North of Vietnam, Hanoi is famous for its beauty, functions, the elegance and hospitality of its people.

Traveling to my hometown, you will never forget its beautiful nature. Firstly, you can realize a prominent feature that Hanoi is surrounded by serene rivers. The Red river curves passing the city as a soft silk making my hometown picturesque. The banks of this river are covered by green corn fields. In the distance, red roofs hide behind high lines of bamboo. All make a peaceful view of the suburb. In addition, my hometown is known as “the city of lakes”. You can visit many dreamy lakes here such as the Sword Lake, West Lake, Truc Bach Lake… How romantic it is to stroll around the lake and contemplate the sunset! You will totally feel relaxed after a hard-working day of busy life at that moment. On the other, nature favourably grants this area an agreeable weather. Although Hanoi is in the tropical zone, the influence of Northeast monsoon gives my hometown such a perfect cool autumn that nowhere else in Vietnam has. Although my city is very modern now, its natural beauty will never disappear.

My hometown is popular for a combination of traditional and modern style. If you had chance to go to Hanoi in autumn, surely, you would be fascinated with Hanoi’s beauty at that time. In its coldish wind, Hanoi looks both quite ancient and romantic. The gold leaves falling gently on long and quiet old streets will give you a rather sad feeling. It’s an unlimited inspiration for artists to create immortal works. Once in Hanoi, you might spend a lot of time visiting its beauty spots and historical places. Located in the center of my hometown, the Sword Lake is considered a “pretty flower basket” of the capital. This beautiful sight is really worth visiting with sparkling sunshine reflected by green water with its Ancient Tortoise Tower in the middle of the lake. In addition, you may entirely feel pleasant with solemn and peaceful atmosphere in many old pagodas, shrines and churches. Yet, Hanoi now has been modernized day by day. Plenty of new shops, new buildings and new parks are mushrooming everywhere. The straight wide boulevards with ranges of trees are always busy and exciting. It’s no doubt that you can buy everything at supermarkets here with reasonable price. My hometown has become one of the most attractive cities in Asia because of its harmonious combination of traditional and modern style.

Hanoians are the most elegant and friendly ones I have ever met. You can find everywhere their cheerful smiles and happiness in their eyes. The elegance of Hanoians is shown by their appetite, costumes and their communication. Ingredients for Hanoi course can be available, but its recipe is completely exquisite and elaborate. Only by enjoying it, will it satisfy your taste. Talking to Hanoi people, you will be absorbed in their hospitality, and they will leave you unforgettable nice impressions. The more modern my hometown is, the more active and creative Hanoians become, but their typical polite manner and their charming smile will stay forever.

Hanoi extremely deserves the heart of my country. It’s the great pride for all Vietnameses. Please travel to my hometown, you will discover more interesting things than I can tell you.

Topic sentences:

*Paragraph 1: Traveling to my hometown, you will never forget its beautiful nature.

*Paragraph 2: My hometown is popular for a combination of traditional and modern style.

*Paragraph 3: Hanoians are the most elegant and friendly ones I have ever met.

Concluding paragraph:

Hanoi extremely deserves the heart of my country. It’s the great pride for all Vietnameses. Please travel to my hometown, you will discover more interesting things than I can tell you.

PDuong

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I have visited many places through Viet Nam from the North to the South but Dl i the most beautiful place and left me much nice impression about he beauty spots and the people here

Located in the highland DL is the city of LD, in the South of Viet Nam , about 350 km from HCM city.

DL is not a big city with dust and noise , it's famous for the climate and its sigh seeings, waterfall, HXH river, love valley., LangBiang highland....

DL may be called the city of flowers , it's familiar name which the tourists name because of their loving for it.There're many kinds of flowers grown here in the field or in the green houses. Thanks to good climate such as: wet, cool rainy, fertile soil...so flower's become the main feature of DL, and growing flower and tour service are the main occupation of the citizens here.

The people living in DL are from a lot of provinces in my country, they came here with hope to build a new nicer and happier life. They're very hospital, hard working,and approachable. When you're a stranger and get lost , you'll be easy to find the enthusiastic help of the people here. They'll tell you the way to get to where you want to.

Besides flowers, DL is also attracts both domestic and foreign visitors by list of famous places. Being the longest and nicest river, HXH , in the middle of DL and runs along about 4 km, is Dl people's pride. It's water 's not really blue , just reddy_blue, you can fish or row a boat there. If you a kind of person like shopping you can go to the main market , next to HXH river ,and find a lot of lovely souvenirs for friends. Going on the discovery, lots of charmingful beauty spots well come you like : love valley about 5 km from DL market ,or you can watch CamLy waterfall , Than Tho lake... All have been called special names which you can't find anywhere. Don't worry about the means of transport here, there 're many kinds for you to choice such as: bike, motor, car and horse also. You're served in high quality hotel from 3 to 5 stars.

Along main roads, DL has kept alot of its monuments which were built in French style and the hills of green pillow ..All will make you the relaxing feeling.

If you have a chance, please come and visit DL for a time, you'll be happy with your choice.

Welcome to QN

Quang Ninh province,my lovely hometown are welcoming you al.Located over 100 kilometers north-eastern of Ha Noi,Quang Ninh has a lot of scenic beauty spots,historic relics,culture,and art to attract visitors

Classified/ recognized as one of the World Heritages, QN only QN/Not the who QN possesses thousands of big and small islands.Each of which has its own characteristics with various caves: Sung Sot(surprising) Cave,Thien Cung (heaven palave)Cave,Trinh Nu(Virgin) Cave,Dau Go (……)cave,…Tuan Chau (land cruze)island is the only inland of all. It was newly built on a location 8km from the centre of Ha Long city.Here you can participate in water sports such as:high-speed motorboat,canoes,water skiing,or go fishing,tour around Ha Long Bay on balloon,or other activities such as climbing or camping.In 1962,President Ho Chi Minh visited Ha Long Bay and made a stop here for vacation.Nowadays,Tuan Chau Island is one of the most attractive destination in Ha Long city.

its well-known religious spot is Yen Tu Pagoda, about 40 km from Ha Long city and 14 km from Uong Bi town( why to mention UB town?) . the majesty of its mountains with the ancient and quietness of its pagodas makes the beauty of Yen Tu. .Every year Yen Tu attracts thousands of tourists and sightseer times,including foreigners and inland guests.Passing through to the Le and Nguyen dynasty,Yen Tu become the local point of Vietnamese Buddhism and be very famous.

In addition,you can visit many many attractive places when you come to my hometown :Cua Ong Temple,Long Tien Pagoda,Quan Lan Temple,Bach Dang rive,…And you will have chances to enjoy many sea food such as:holothurian,abalone,shrimp,crab,arca.gracilaria,…

That’s something about my hometown.It’s very beautiful and interesting…Come here with me,I will be your best tourist guide,and I am sure that you wanna to stay for the time as long as possible.Welcome to my hometown,all my friends-k56a!!!

Thu ha

1)ADVERTISE MY COUNTRY AS A TOURIST ATTRACTION

About 150km from the capital city,Quang Ninh , my hometown is one of the most famous beauty spots of Viet Nam.It attracts thousands of people every year.

Coming here, you can visit Halong bay,the wonderful worl natural heritage.Blue sky,green water with moutains,caves make its beauty.You will be absolutely relaxed by -à with the natural surroundings and fresh air.It's also the reason why many poetries was composed here.

Leaving Halong bay,don't forget to visit Tuan Chau resort with modern achitecture .You will be deeply impressed by the show of dolphins and especially you can try parachuting,a new exciting sport.During your travelling, you can do many others things.If you want to go shopping, our city will satisfy your need with many shops,markets and supermarkets whre you can find interesting souvernirs like shell,post cards of marine creature.For eating, we have a wide range of restaurants to serve seafood,our speciality.You'll have chance to try a lot of delicious foods.They are really excellence.

Of cause all these things will take you quite a lot of time.It means that you have to find a place to stay.It's very easy because hotels are available everywhere.But if you want to save money,you can chose hotels which are abit far from the habour and the city center.It's still convinient for you tour.And I'm sure that once visiting Quang Ninh,you'll want to come again and again.

NguyÔn ThÞ Minh Thanh

Lying in the center part of VN, Hatinh -my hometown is a really ideal address to pay a visit to.

Not a very big town, it is a place of peace and history, which is suitable for those who love quietness. It is my pride to tell you about it.

With many gentle sights, Hatinh is sure to give you the feeling of peace and comfort. You will find it wonderful to go camping by the mild streams and rivers, sitting under vital trees. You also have a chance to admire Lam river, whose name has been written in many songs and poems. And you are fond of the sea? Thien Cam beach is good enough to satisfy you, not only by its charm but also by its delicious seafood. Hatinh will release all of your stress and worry about life.

Coming to Hatinh, you shouldn’t miss visiting its historical spots. Dong Loc T-junction is one of the most attractive places to every one. It reappears a period of history and praises heroic girls. You can also visit the hometown of Tran Phu, Nguyen Du-our country’s famous men. It makes us feel more proud of our nation.

Each person has his own loved land and for me, it’s my hometown. Once visit it, you will “fall in love” with it immediately.

Gardian

My hometown, namdinh, not far from hanoi, is a beautiful place to visit because its hidden charm and friendly people.

Namdinh is in the north of vietnam. It’s not too rich but people ther are very studious .Have you ever heard about PhuGiay festival there,It’s one of the most festival in Namdinh and in our country.in March everyyear, people come here to spray good thing to their family and friends.there are so many people that the air becoms hotter and noisier.

On the frist day of spring, you could visit namdinh to join Vieng market.It’s special that you can buy and sell trees or old funitures to bring luck to your house

If you like fresh air, you can have a tour to two beautiful beaches: ThinhLong and Quatlam.On sunny day coming ther you can swim,go along the beach, play volleyball.It’s romantic to see the sunset and sunrise,besides that namdinh is the home of Truong Chinh.In xuan truong, people buile the house to remind him .We can visit here to know more about his simplicity and life.

Coming to my hometown, you also taste many delicious food such as Tam rice and Nhan cake

People ther are very friendly and hard.and eapecially When they have differenties, they are never bored and always find out the way to solve them easily with a smile.

I’m sure that when you com here , you ‘ll remember it forever because of its unforgetable beauty

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